Peer Review for Jianna LoCricchio

Here is the link to Jianna's research report that I read over and will go over in this blog post.


Jianna's Research Report

     I chose to do the research recommendation activity, which is an editing activity that goes over the detail and development of the research report as well as the credibility of the sources that she used, and the variety of these sources that she found for her project. I think that I helped her know that she was doing things correctly but I made sure that I let her know that she should look a little more about the author so that the credibility of these sources are good.
     From the Student's Guide readings, I made sure that Jianna knew that the ethos, the credibility of these sources is so important.  Without a credible source to back up the evidence and claims that you make in the video, it is hard for the audience to want to believe what the author of the video is saying.  Without a credible amount of information, the audience will suffer because they won't know whether or not to believe the information presented to them.  What I really admired about her work was the amount of detail that Jianna included in her research report.  I think that I could learn from her about adding this amount of detail to my research report.