Opening
MAIN IDEA
- Discuss the three things that I am going to be discussing in my course final and the three things that I have learned in this class
- time management
- how I have changed as a writer
- importance of finding a topic that I am actually interested in
EVIDENCE
- How I struggled with my writing strategies
- important because it will show how I have grown over the semester
- Why I had the time management issues because of my different classes that are so hard
- will explain the reasons behind my choice to take less credits for the hard classes
IMPORTANCE
- The importance of including this section is that it will explain the reasons why I have grown over the course of this semester and why it was so great that I was able to learn so much over this semester.
HOW TO GRAB THE READERS' ATTENTION
- start off with how much I originally was a complete mess at the beginning of the semester and how much I have grown over the past 4 months.
Body Paragraph 1
MAIN IDEA
- Discuss the reasons why I struggled with time management and the things that I did to help myself become more organized
- Discuss my plans for changing my organizational skills
- How it will help me in the future
EVIDENCE
- Hard classes that I was taking with this English class
- shows how my expecations were completely wrong for the class overall
- Thought that English wouldn't take as much time
- completely underestimated the amount of time that it would take to get all of the necessary work done for these projects.
IMPORTANCE:
- The importance of this paragraph is that it showed me that I will always have a lot of things to do but it is the amount of time that I spend figuring out how much I should spend on each thing and learning how to prioritize my time that was what was an important outcome of this class.
Body Paragraph 2:
MAIN IDEA
- Discuss the different ways that I changed as a writer since the beginning of the semester
- "Heavy editor"
- Became an "edit while I work" kinda writer
- What I have done to change my ways
EVIDENCE
- Differences between the 3 projects and how those worked for me
- the importance of showing my progression of my writing throughout the semester and how it has affected my writing overall
- What I have changed in my writing over the semester
- the importance of showing how I have changed my strategies of approaching the writing when I am assigned the different projects.
IMPORTANCE:
- The importance of including this paragraph is that the difference in how I approached my writing projects and why it is so important to have been able to change the way that I write so that I can become a more confident writer and edit as I go instead of editing after the whole essay is written.
Body Paragraph 3
MAIN IDEA
- Discuss the different ways that I have discovered what kind of things interest me and why that has improved the ways that I have become a bit of a better writer.
- Describe my change in major and the importance of that in my interest of writing
- Occupational Therapy
- Public Health
- How I have grown as a writer because of my major change
EVIDENCE:
- Discuss what it was like to be Undecided for a while and trying to write the papers without having any interest in these subjects
- what made me change my major finally
- How I didn't know what to do for the 2nd project because I wasn't expecting it
- the second project really opened my eyes to the fields of OT and public health
IMPORTANCE
This paragraph is important because without talking about the differing writing changes, I wouldn't be able to defend the amount of work that I have done throughout the semester.
Conclusion:
MAIN IDEA
- Conclude with the reasons why this class has helped so much and why it is such a great experience for my future
- Describe the biggest thing that I took away from this class
EVIDENCE
- Why I became much more confident in my writing
- important because it was really important for me to become more confident in my writing and how I approach these writing projects
- How I have increased my motivations for writing
- important because I have learned that these are the topics that are most interesting to me and make me want to write better
IMPORTANCE
- This paragraph is important because without the conclusion saying why it is so great that I have completed this course and learned so much, I will probably be able to become more successful in my writing career in the future.
LARGER SIGNIFICANCE
- The biggest picture of this reflection is that I have grown intellectually because of this course. It has taught me so much about myself and about my writing. I really feel much more confident about myself when I am writing a paper, which is important because I used to be really embarrassed about my writing and what I would produce. So this class has really helped me overcome that fear.
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